Winter tree branch bare......
Cold wind blows your leaves away......
Tree searches for spring......
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This haiku is unique because you are actually talking to the tree in a conversation. The fact that the tree is searching for spring conveys a sense of melancholy, but also the hope of having its leaves once again. The numerous ellipses emphasize this effect and make it more dramatic in my opinion.
ReplyDeleteI think the picture goes perfect with you Haiku. I could visualize what your saying without having to look at the picture posted. Not only is the trees branched looking to move forward to spring but I am too!
ReplyDeleteI like how it is a complete discription not only of this piture but of of all trees in winter. It really captures the feeling of nature in the cold months.
ReplyDeleteThe picture is perfect for your poem. I liked how you describe bare branches and wind blowing leaves. You can actually relate to the wind doing that in life.
ReplyDeleteGood JOB!!